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She feels like a porcelain doll.
When she first came into
This world, the creator was
Filled with joy.

A little brown hair
Brown eyed girl took
Her home.  Life was
Going great for the little
Girl and her doll.

The doll went everywhere with
The little girl, but over time
All that traveling was starting
To wear and tear the dolls poor
Little dress.

Soon the little girl grew up
And said “I don‘t need you
Anymore. I‘m too old for
Dolls.” and casted her
Aside like she was nothing.

Soon the doll found a
New owner. She picked
Up the broken doll and
Said so sweetly “I don‘t
Care if I‘m to old for dolls
I‘ll keep you for my own.
I‘ll put you back together,
I promise, it‘ll be like you‘re
Brand new.”
A tear slid down the dolls
Broken yet beautiful face.

Now this once broken doll
Is slowly getting all the pieces
Glued back together. And maybe
Just maybe a smile will forever
Stay on her face.  All thanks to
That one person who took the time
To put all the dolls broken pieces
Back together.
©2008-2009 ~xdarkxwingedxangelx
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Just a little somethin that I came up with

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:iconxxcrashgirlxx:
It's pretty good. The idea is fun, but a bit overused, and the flow could be better. Think carefully about your rythym and word choice, especially when writing poetry rather than prose.

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